Low


(Diabetichick) #1

I wrote this poem to try to describe low blood sugars.

Dangerously empty

Hunger. Thirst

Need. Desire

Low. Want

Inexplicable longing

for something,

anything

more.

 

--Sarah [insert surname here]


(Marie) #2

hmmmm...yeah. I does sound like a low. Lows suck. I feel like im going to fall over and i shake like maaad. heheh. also if you where to take out the hunger and thirst or say that they were thursting for...something...it would sound like a very depressed/desperate person. =D yesh..! =)